One of the problems is the dialogue. I have now eliminated it.
These are some of my notes from the Hangout meeting:
- What does the Rose do to change the attitude of the sunflower. Why would he care if he gets weeded out or not, he doesn't want him there any way. There has to be a change.
- Sunflower is about bigotry
- Watch "War" with Kevin Costner
- There is nothing redeeming about the rose
- Similar to Ugly Duckling
- Possible story change - Farmers Wife comes and pulls the rose out and places it in special pot
- Perception of beauty
- Flower attracts bees -talks about diversity
- Realize just another part of beauty
- Could create interactive book
- Apple Lion has interactive book builder
- Could be a lyrical piece of color light
- growth of the flower
- Research should be woven into the piece who has done it before
- how is it different and better?
- technical, aesthetics and narrative
- making it interactive could push it
- what area does this further?
- Do we like that character or not.
- Struggle of him getting over his conflict
I have a Second story about a worker in a factory who finds a light, but then has it broken but then finds a piece of it. These are some notes about this one:
- Read book "Steal This Plot"
- This story could be similar to adam and eve / tree of knowledge
- Watch Pleasant ville. -Toby McGuire
- Black and white to color
- Similar to Wizard of Ozz
- It isn't clear what the core conflict is.
- Whole world change after being lit up.
- Watch Lawnmower man
- Watch Flowers for Algerian -guy sweeps floor. He is a janitor. He takes a pill to help him get smarter.
- short life and see color
- long life and see ambient color
- it could be too late for people who use color.
What Direction do you want to take it?
- ***RESEARCH (gotta love it!)
- How is this going to further the world of CG?
- How does this add to the intellectual stories of IP?
Quite a bit of stuff to think bout. I think I have good changes, I'll post them tomorrow. (2am....Good Night)
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