Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Story Revision 01


After more thought on the story, I took the idea that there was nothing redeeming about the tulip to make us care if he gets weeded out or not.  So I had him help the sunflower in the only way he would know.  Thoughts?


Sunflower and Tulip fields







Sunflower basking in the sun


Hearing a buzzing sound, He looks to see what it could be.


Big grin, trying to look as appealing as possible

...but it was not enough

Hearing another buzz,

Sunflower tires to look even more attractive.

Again it is useless.

Sunflower goes back to catch more sunlight

In the middle of sunning him self a tulip Poops up.

Fsunny motions that the tulip is supposed to not be there.


Tulip refuses to leave.

Another buzz is heard

Sunflower tries to be even more attractive with a bigger grin.

Still no use.

The bee flies by.

The bee stops in his tracks

The bee finds a great scent

More bees come and enjoy the nectar.

The sunflower is sad

Seeing that, the tulip feels bad.

To help the sunflower, the tulip takes one of his bees and gives it to the sunflower.



Placing the bee on the sunflower

the sunflower is happy



Just then the sunflower notices something.







Farmer off in the distance weeding







sunflower tries to think of a plan (tulip won't be reading)







Sunflower has an idea.







Sunflower scoops up dirt.







Slapps dirt on tulips face.







Plucks pedals from his head.







Sunflower goes to work on the tulip







stunned tulip incognito.







Farmer walks by and gives the "scrawny" tulip the evil eye.

Farmer walks off.






tulip shakes off the disguise.







Tuilp gestures thanks to the sunflower




Pull out to see the sun set.


End


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